[dw-nonfree] diversity statement tweaks

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[commit: http://hg.dwscoalition.org/dw-nonfree/rev/527d3823ece4]

http://bugs.dwscoalition.org/show_bug.cgi?id=4136

Wording tweaks based on feedback.

Patch by denise.

Files modified:

• views/legal/diversity.tt

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diff -r 21c1a41562ae -r 527d3823ece4 views/legal/diversity.tt
--- a/views/legal/diversity.tt	Wed Dec 28 16:05:14 2011 +0800
+++ b/views/legal/diversity.tt	Wed Dec 28 17:01:34 2011 +0800
@@ -24,10 +24,11 @@
 
 <p>We welcome you.</p>
 
-<p>We welcome people of any gender identity or expression, race, ethnicity, size, nationality,
-sexual orientation, ability level, neurotype, religion, elder status, family structure, culture, subculture, and
-political opinion. We welcome activists, artists, bloggers, crafters,
-dilettantes, musicians, photographers, readers, writers, ordinary people,
+<p>We welcome people of any gender identity or expression, race, ethnicity, 
+size, nationality, sexual orientation, ability level, neurotype, religion, 
+elder status, family structure, culture, subculture, political opinion,
+identity, and self-identification. We welcome activists, artists, bloggers, 
+crafters, dilettantes, musicians, photographers, readers, writers, ordinary people,
 extraordinary people, and everyone in between. We welcome people who want
 to change the world, people who want to keep in touch with friends, people
 who want to make great art, and people who just need a break after work. We
@@ -43,12 +44,12 @@
 or a sketchbook. Conservative or liberal, libertarian or socialist &mdash;
 we believe it's possible for people of all viewpoints and persuasions to
 come together and learn from each other. We believe in the broad spectrum
-of human experience. We believe that amazing things come when people
-from different worlds and world-views approach each other to create a
-conversation. </p>
+of individual and collective experience and in the inherent dignity of all people. 
+We believe that amazing things come when people from different worlds and 
+world-views approach each other to create a conversation.</p>
 
 <p>We get excited about creativity &mdash; from pro to amateur, from novels
-to haiku, from the artist who's been doing this for decades to the person
+to haiku, from the photographer who's been doing this for decades to the person
 who just picked up a sketchbook last week. We support maximum freedom
 of creative expression, within the few restrictions we need to keep the
 service viable for other users. With servers in the US we're obliged to
@@ -60,20 +61,20 @@
 <p>We think accessibility for people with disabilities is a priority,
 not an afterthought. We think neurodiversity is a feature, not a bug. We
 believe in being inclusive, welcoming, and supportive of anyone who comes
-to us with good faith and the desire to build a community. </p>
+to us with good faith and the desire to build a community.</p>
 
 <p>We have enough experience to know that we won't get any of this perfect
 on the first try. But we have enough hope, energy, and idealism to want to
 learn things we don't know now. We may not be able to satisfy everyone, but
 we can certainly work to avoid offending anyone. And we promise that if we
 get it wrong, we'll listen carefully and respectfully to you when you point
-it out to us, and we'll do our best to make good on our mistakes. </p>
+it out to us, and we'll do our best to make good on our mistakes.</p>
 
 <p>We think our technical and business experience is important, but we
 think our community experience is more important. We know what goes wrong
 when companies say one thing and do another, or when they refuse to say
 anything at all. We believe that keeping our operations transparent is just
-as important as keeping our servers stable. </p>
+as important as keeping our servers stable.</p>
 
 <p>We use the service we're selling, and we built it because we wanted
 it ourselves. We won't treat people as second-class undesireables
@@ -84,5 +85,4 @@
 <p>Come dream with us.</p>
 <br />
 <p style="float:right; text-align:right;"><a rel="license" href="http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/3.0/">
-<img alt="Creative Commons BY-SA 3.0" style="border-width: 0;" src="http://i.creativecommons.org/l/by-sa/3.0/us/88x31.png" />
-</a><br /><em>This document is usable under a Creative Commons 3.0 BY-SA license.</em></p>
+<img alt="Creative Commons BY-SA 3.0" style="border-width: 0;" src="http://i.creativecommons.org/l/by-sa/3.0/us/88x31.png" /></a><br /><em>This document is usable under a Creative Commons 3.0 BY-SA license.</em></p>
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